Trying too hard?
I give this a 2 for the effort. You did take the time to put all of those together and to come up with a brief clip for each, I will give you that. however this might be overkill. This seems very similar to the work of TomSka, Cyanide and Happiness, and Robot Chicken. However if I may offer suggestive feedback, I would say 'Write out a bit of a script and have your friends review it, have them also comment what they like and didn't like, and if it is a liked segment, use it, if not, modify it and try again.
"If at first you don't succeed, try, try again."
(Sorry if I am being a bit harsh but I'm sharing my honest opinion, I don't mean to offend either)